What does this love poem say to you?
Lost in love,theres no way to know.But for me forever true.Maybe only lust.But she will always be as precious as the rarest blue diamond,or a ruby red locket on her neck.This glow I see thats in her eyes.I want so very much more.Each time I see her precious smile.I pull her close to me.As each day ends and night time comes.We both turn in for bed.The love within our precious dance.Will always overflow.So is it true love.There is no one who really can say.But the moment of love will always last.As evening breaks for day.
This poem is in my new book.The book is called"the cries of a willow tree." What do you think of this poem.What does that name sound like for a book of poetry.
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Beautiful, just like the rest…
I like it,
sorry…but to me it says…dont quit your day job!
I like that name for a book. Nut the poem says that the writer isn’t sure whether he/she is in true love or not, and it may be only lust or infatuation. But at the moment they truly are happy.
i love it
I’ll give it an 8
wow
I hope she is more precious to you than a "ruby red locket on her neck."
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I won’t comment on the content. I just think you should know I hope she is more precious than a necklace. That is all. I think it’s sweet you’ll write poetry about a girl you like, and that "The Cries of a Willow Tree" could be quite artsy if it has a neatly drawn book cover.